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lanky with long dark hair; i thought he was the most beautiful thing in the world and even though he denied it, i knew he was just being modest. sometimes i would let him stick his hands up my shirt and touch my ribs. he'd slide his long fingers up and down each one, reminding me of how thin i am. i often forget.

i liked it when he touched me, but that was short lived and it was already too late to tell him to stop. it was like he didn't understand the meaning of the word "no" but i could forgive it because the mistakes he made were so honest.

"what would you do if i died?" he asked.
"i would be sad," was all i said and he looked disappointed.

today his hair is short and his eyes show a change. today i realized that he is the type of boy that all the teenage girls write about and it makes me feel pathetic in more ways than one.

he's been my inspiration for too long and it's time for me to move on because he's gone.
he's been gone for a long time.
though most of my pieces are personal, this one is more so.
i may post more personal pieces yet.
i feel like you guys don't know me well enough.




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deeptheatrics Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2011
You are such a fantastic writer.
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the-chemical-factory Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2011  Student Writer
thank you !

ps. i love your icon,
what happened to lani garver was a great book.
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deeptheatrics Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2011
I've been on deviantart for years and you're only the second person who's made the connection! I loved it too
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the-chemical-factory Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2011  Student Writer
yeah, sadly the book isn't as well known as it should be.
<3
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Catastrophobia Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
i can relate to this..so much that it almost scares me.
i love it.
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:iconthe-chemical-factory:
the-chemical-factory Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2011  Student Writer
thank you <3
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tanjorstr Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2011
If you scrap this, I will be less happy. I don't really care if you have another muse now, because I don't think muses are necessary. However, this is good writing. It is... delicate, I think. It's not a thing that I can do, and I like it a lot.

-Tanner
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:iconthe-chemical-factory:
the-chemical-factory Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2011  Student Writer
thank you very much (:
it's not to be scrapped, don't worry.
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tanjorstr Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2011
Comforting :)
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YouInventedMe Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2010   Writer
but i could forgive it because the mistakes he made were so honest.

splendid
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