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“the sun is setting, isn’t it?” he once said to her,
“i may not be able to see it, but i can feel it on my
face.”

[she became his eyes and taught him how to see.]

-

he used to hold her tightly during thunder and lightning
storms, and she would feel safe, though he  needed that
more than her.   

she use to describe the sun and the stars to him,
saying they reminded her of him.

he gave her everything she never deserved and
she accepted it with arms wide open.

but now, no matter if he left her or if he stayed
there would still be an ocean, it no longer mattered how
many promises she made and broke.

-

the dim-lit streets were pouring with crack-whores
and he’d sit ill fit with expressions that scream her
name as his heart would beat “i’m sorry” though he
had nothing to be sorry of.

[he had a sad habit of blaming himself whenever she
was at fault.]

either way she won’t hear, she never hears him
and she’ll have fun picking up the pieces of her
shattered broken life without him, knowing that i
love you became i hate you.

she made him feel the way no person ever should,
and she was blind(like him) to the fact he needed help.

she never noticed that he stopped smiling in his sleep,
or maybe she just didn’t want to.

-

now she knows and she names all the stars after him
and prays for forgiveness even though he’s long gone
and she’ll never get it.

she was the death of him, and soon he will be the
death of her, making them the death of each other.
:iconthe-chemical-factory:

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if i have eyes why can't i see?

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:iconaurayathewhite:
it's beautiful as it is :) lovely imagery and stuff <33

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Can we pretend I'm amazing? Instead of what we both know...

Close your eyes, for your eyes will only tell the truth, and the truth isn't what you want to see. In the dark it is easy to pretend, that the truth is what it ought to be <333
:iconmegfire:
Ooh, I get the feeling there's more to the story than what's written here?

--
Understeer is when you hit the wall with the front of the car,
oversteer is when you hit the wall with the rear of the car.
Horsepower is how fast you hit the wall,
torque is how far you take the wall with you

MOPAR = More Power!! :boogie:
:iconthe-chemical-factory:
there certainly is.

--

i'll move to paris,
shoot some heroin
and fuck with the stars.

:iconthe-chemical-factory:
thanks 8]

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i'll move to paris,
shoot some heroin
and fuck with the stars.

:iconmegfire:
O.o

--
Understeer is when you hit the wall with the front of the car,
oversteer is when you hit the wall with the rear of the car.
Horsepower is how fast you hit the wall,
torque is how far you take the wall with you

MOPAR = More Power!! :boogie:
:iconfirefairy102:
This is really good, but what happened to him?
You're writing is really awesome! (=

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Dude........(?) :D

*falls over from own awesomeness*

Light....it's magic
:iconblood-sucker-vampire:
Wow...I like the imagery :] Nice job ^^

--
"As far as we discern, the sole purpose of human existence is to kindle a light of meaning in the darkness of mere being."
- C.G. Jung
:iconpieeen:
oh, that's beautiful. and painful. but pretty (:

--
i promise you that when the clock strikes one
i'll turn it back to twelve
:iconunseen-wonder:
it made me sad, beautifully written, really really liked it :heart:

--
If I had a world of my own, everything would be nonsense. Nothing would be what it is, because everything would be what it isn't. And contrary wise, what is, it wouldn't be. And what it wouldn't be, it would. You see?
- alice
:iconaurayathewhite:
you're welcome hun

--
Can we pretend I'm amazing? Instead of what we both know...

Close your eyes, for your eyes will only tell the truth, and the truth isn't what you want to see. In the dark it is easy to pretend, that the truth is what it ought to be <333

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