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dear boy:

why do you keep running away? when i see you i want to scream your name in a pitch higher than the tide pulls, but even if i did you wouldn’t turn around.

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dear girl:

did you know that it’s bad luck to make wishes on shooting stars?
did you know that fucking is just physics? so don’t be jealous.
did you know that –
did you know,
did you know,
did you know?

i’m high right now and
honest-to-god i’m not okay.

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dear boy:

policemen are patrolling libraries when they should be outside your house getting ready for what’s going to happen. i can tell that expression on your face means nothing but bad.

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dear girl:

i’m afraid that flesh on flesh will turn into pen on paper and just be a part of the past,
another suicidal poets piece –
one that will make people want to cry,
one that will make you want to cry because
it would be the proof left behind, saying that you couldn’t fix me
but did you ever stop to think that maybe i didn’t want to be fixed?

you taught me how to laugh but be warned, i’m not as beautiful on the inside.
: D

more for ~kawaiimax 'cause she's awesome.

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+ thanks toooo ~ChloroformBoy for featuring meee.
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:iconkokopuffchan:
KokoPuffChan Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2009   Writer
i'm not as beautiful on the inside.
I love this.
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:iconthe-chemical-factory:
the-chemical-factory Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2009  Student Writer
thanks !
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:iconkokopuffchan:
KokoPuffChan Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2009   Writer
You're very welcome. ;D
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:iconyume-kami-aika:
Yume-Kami-Aika Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2009
Lovely :3
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:iconthe-chemical-factory:
the-chemical-factory Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2009  Student Writer
:heart: :heart: :heart:
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:iconseabelle:
seabelle Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
featured - [link]
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:iconthe-chemical-factory:
the-chemical-factory Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2009  Student Writer
<3
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:iconpanicfast:
Panicfast Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2009
oh my god. i cried. it hit that close to home.
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:iconthe-chemical-factory:
the-chemical-factory Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2009  Student Writer
awhh.
<3<3
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:iconmichi-iyo:
michi-iyo Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2009
this is wonderful.


i’m afraid that flesh on flesh will turn into pen on paper and just be a part of the past,

is my favourite line.

but i loved all of it. i really liked how the boy really had something male and the girl something feminine.

good job. :heart:
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:iconthe-chemical-factory:
the-chemical-factory Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2009  Student Writer
thank youu :heart:
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:iconkaleidoscopecolours:
KaleidoscopeColours Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2009
this is great!!! probably one of my fav yet :)
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:iconthe-chemical-factory:
the-chemical-factory Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2009  Student Writer
thanks ~
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:iconhearttoankle:
hearttoankle Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2009  Student Photographer
I read this out loud like slam.
It's kind of hard to talk really fast when you're tearing up.

This is amazingwonderfulpowerfuldsjflskdjf.
:heart:
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:iconthe-chemical-factory:
the-chemical-factory Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2009  Student Writer
ohmy :heart: thank you.
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:iconvelocity07:
velocity07 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2009
This = amazing! :love:
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:iconthe-chemical-factory:
the-chemical-factory Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2009  Student Writer
:hug:
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:iconvelocity07:
velocity07 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2009
:huggle: XD
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:icontwilightpoetess:
TwilightPoetess Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
*sigh* this is wonderful. I love every word. Excellent job.
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:iconthe-chemical-factory:
the-chemical-factory Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2009  Student Writer
thank youu :heart:
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:iconbeautifuldisgrace09:
BeautifulDisgrace09 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
awesome! really great! =^.^=
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:iconthe-chemical-factory:
the-chemical-factory Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2009  Student Writer
thanks :hug:
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:iconbeautifuldisgrace09:
BeautifulDisgrace09 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
you're welcome!! =^.^=
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:iconwondering-souls:
wondering-souls Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2009
Amazing yet sad
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:iconthe-chemical-factory:
the-chemical-factory Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2009  Student Writer
<3
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:iconelituflive:
Elituflive Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2009  Student General Artist
This is so amazing...
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:iconthe-chemical-factory:
the-chemical-factory Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2009  Student Writer
thanks.
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:iconx--unrealreality:
x--unrealreality Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2009
<3 !!!!!!!!!
+i really like the last dear girl.
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:iconthe-chemical-factory:
the-chemical-factory Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2009  Student Writer
thanks !
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:iconlove-for-sale:
Love-For-Sale Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2009
this is so emotional and beautiful.

i love it. :3
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:iconthe-chemical-factory:
the-chemical-factory Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2009  Student Writer
<3 <3 <3
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:iconflorecentdreamer:
florecentdreamer Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2009  Student Digital Artist
thats sad but rly good... i really like it =]
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:iconthe-chemical-factory:
the-chemical-factory Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2009  Student Writer
thanks !
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:iconflorecentdreamer:
florecentdreamer Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2009  Student Digital Artist
np =]
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:iconwhyamibothering:
whyamibothering Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
this is really good. i'm really glad i stayed up to read this = )
p.s your icon is v. cute
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:iconthe-chemical-factory:
the-chemical-factory Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2009  Student Writer
thanks,
thanks.
;D
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:icontalkinbreazy:
Talkinbreazy Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2009
wow...deep...

I like it!
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:iconthe-chemical-factory:
the-chemical-factory Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2009  Student Writer
:heart:
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:icontalkinbreazy:
Talkinbreazy Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2009
There's so many different emotions going through, but it's all repeated in a way...like both the boy and the girl feel this same things, but in different ways...

Does this make any sense at all?
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:iconthe-chemical-factory:
the-chemical-factory Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2009  Student Writer
i see <:
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:icontalkinbreazy:
Talkinbreazy Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2009
Ok, good, that makes me feel less stupid. :)
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:icondeadsoulmate:
DeadSoulMate Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2009  Student Writer
This was just so beautiful. I can completely relate to this at the moment as well.
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:iconthe-chemical-factory:
the-chemical-factory Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2009  Student Writer
thanks
<3.
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:icontalkerwolf:
Talkerwolf Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2009  Student Writer
That was an amazing piece of writing to read, I loved that last line so much, it gave a great impact. I'm definitely adding it to mu faves
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:iconthe-chemical-factory:
the-chemical-factory Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2009  Student Writer
thank ya (:
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:icontalkerwolf:
Talkerwolf Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2009  Student Writer
lol
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:iconawasteof-paint:
Awasteof-paint Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2009
i’m afraid that flesh on flesh will turn into pen on paper

ahh brilliant.
youarelovely. :heart:
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:iconthe-chemical-factory:
the-chemical-factory Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2009  Student Writer
awhh :heart:
thank you.
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:iconrennskye:
rennskye Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2009
"it would be the proof left behind, saying that you couldn’t fix me
but did you ever stop to think that maybe i didn’t want to be fixed?"

This was... doll-pretty. The sort with glass eyes that have fogged over a bit with time and so you can't quite see inside, but will never close.
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:iconthe-chemical-factory:
the-chemical-factory Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2009  Student Writer
:heart: :heart:
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